Chapter 52: Book 2 Chapter 3 Update (Not A Chapter)

Hey guys. I had gotten some feedback on Chapter 3, where they explore the Alliance HQ. It was a small statement, something along the lines of "I'm surprised there wasn't any conversations with anyone from the Alliance HQ."

It wasn't a complaint, it wasn't negative in any way, but this made me think a lot. Almost nobody complained about this, but I realized that my mindset when I wrote the chapter really made the chapter not really turn out like how I had in mind. Analyzing it, it's like the only thing in the world is Jake and the girls. You got almost no descriptions of anything else, hardly able to envision what I had in mind. I also realized it was a great opportunity to expand on the world/setting without it being infodumpy, especially in terms of giving us some details about cultivators.

I have added something like 1800 words to that chapter, you can see it as like a bonus. The next chapter will still be out on Monday. Enjoy and Merry Christmas!

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