Fantasm

Hey all, author here. This is the first story I am writing and wanted to see how it goes. I would appreciate feedback/to hear your thoughts! Without further ado, the synopsis:

Having lost everything he held dear, the young boy Zycor is found by a moth-human hybrid lady, Adria Mori, who stumbles upon him while going through the wreckage of his village. She ends up adopting the boy and helping him on his quest to take vengeance upon the people who wronged him. Along the way, he meets people who show him that family is more than just blood relations. Will Zycor be able to exact the revenge he has spent his life seeking, or do the fates have other plans?