I have been thinking about it for a long time (several days) and I think it is better that I rewrite the story because in the first chapters I put a lot of information at once and I also usually omit information in some parts because I forget to write them and since I already have everything in my head I forget that they have not been explained yet, an example would be the different types of energy, such as AUTHORITY, CONTROL, etc.
That may have counted as a little spoiler but I'll put it in the rewrite
I'm a new writer and I could make a lot of mistakes when it comes to character interactions, but I started to like writing this story and I feel like it would be hard for me to rewrite it after going through more chapters.
I would be very grateful if you could tell me which parts I should improve (I will probably return on November 12 because my university semester ends) Thank you very much
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