Chapter 30: So I’ve been thinking….

I'll just keep this as short as possible.

As I was writing the new chapters, I decided to re read my work and once I did, I realized A LOT of problems with it.

Let's just be honest, this whole griffin thing is pretty unbalanced and the more I write about it, the more I realize how many plot holes lie in wait for me. When I first wrote the beginning chapters of this novel, I wasn't really thinking to be honest.

It was a spur of the moment decision. I was like hey, let me just write something. Initially, I planned to just base the MC's powers on Math, but ended up adding griffins randomly, just to spice it up. That one decision has made writing this story a bit problematic for me.

I'm not enjoying it as much as I thought I was because I introduced way too much, too many OC's and new things. After re reading my book, my love for the story dropped drastically and now my interest in continuing the story as is has dwindled.

Which brings me to my main point, I want to re-write this story. A better story with no griffins,  and very few OC's, or just the MC being an OC in general. The new story will be based on just the mc becoming overpowered just because of modern mathematics. I also plan to pair him with an actual character in the series, not an OC.

So, you guys should vote on whether you want to see that story.

Yes! Re-write it, it could be so much better.

No, stick with it, I think its fine.

Also, for the new book I was thinking of using these few ideas. Vote the one you would like to see the most.

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MC born as Voldy's son.

MC born as a Dumbledore.

MC born as a Selwyn, One of the Sacred 28 that was barely shown in the canon.

MC born as a Lestrange.

MC born as son of Nicolas Flamel.

MC born as a Peverell.

Thanks for sticking around till now. Let me know what you want me to keep from this novel in the comments below.

Cheers,

Apollo.

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