Mortal’s fate

Immortal Martial arts.

It is often described as the road towards endless youth. Many tried to reach the endless time. Perhaps someone did or not. It was probably not important in the grand scheme of the universe, which was the home of many destinies.

Follow the story from the point of view of a mortal boy named Allan. A young boy whose world was turned upside down as he discovers the horrifying truths and tough worlds beyond his knowledge. The play of individuals of far-reaching realities forced him, involuntarily or not, to decide to walk the path of the non-ordinary.

This will be a little collection of my experiences while reading mostly Chinese web novels for a few years. Deciding to work on my own work and story after being fed up with certain ploys and slowly digging ideas that went along the way for a year or two.
Scheduled chapters are mostly around 2000 words. The current plan is to release them slowly after further editing.

I am mostly releasing this piece on royalroad.com with this being the second place.

Also, there is my discord for anyone interested in anything. https://discord.gg/ZESP9WfuQu

What you will find here are the following.
No harem for the better sake of the story.
Fighting whenever it is important.
A love interest that will shape the main character.
Pets?
Quite a bit of dialogue and lots of character interactions. Be it the main character or the surrounding characters around him. Otherwise, there will be 3rd person storytelling.
Forging and crafting in many parts. Weapons such as spears, shafts, swords, and bare fists with some twists.
War and military action.
Cultivation in the later parts of the story. (it will be understood as the story is focused on a few hundred chapters of a mortal world first)
Slower pace because of all the above.

What you will or may not, unfortunately, find here?
Subjectively lesser quality work of second-language reader/writer of English.
An overreaching plot that could sometimes get confusing with a lot of fluff around. Pacing will go along with it.
Wordy descriptions if it is not your thing.
No RPG/litrpg or leveling systems. Instead, the little bits and pieces of cultivation and wuxia/xianxia in small doses.

The beginning of the novel is more steady and slower-paced with a lot of exposition with plot reasons which will shape up mystery and road for the MC. 29ch upwards is a start after the harsh problems of his youth prior to the earlier story.

Some comments and reviews of the pacing and grammar would be appreciated because there is no one I could share this with apart from strangers on the internet. Thank you for reading this far and I hope you will give this a try.