Chapter 23: Deleting.

- I didn't think too much about it before but the mc having sexual content is rather... Revolting. I had described her as Shaltears body type and thought Shaltear was just flat at the time. I started going deeper into Overlord and realized Shaltear looks like a fucking child and by extension my mc doesn't look cute and of age. But LIKE A CHILD. 

- Plot is just going where I decide when I'm writing and has no planning. That's why her gear is fucked and why I screwed up a couple times despite being careful.

- I had no real knowledge of Overlord when writing this. 

So, I'm deleting this. And writing another novel where the main character shares many traits with this one and has the same appeal ( But isn't a child ). As well as an actually thought out plot. But honestly... I want to cry.

If you actually liked it you'll like the other one too. Drop some suggestions if I'm even lucky enough to get any eyes on this obscure little page at the edges of a fanfic. Surprise me ????

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