Aight bruhs time to lay this on for real.
That hurt to write. Anyway… I’ll try to keep this a bit consistent.
1:
Turns out that writing in first person is a bitch for me. Third flows out much easier. I managed to write one scene, at 1300 words, during this entire time from when the last chapter came out for this story. In comparison, I have written 3-4 chapters, each at around 2-3k for 2 other stories each during the same time. With another 7 on my dump project.
2:
I will keep this story up until I finish a rewrite in 3rd POv. I’ll post another announcement and then take it down after a week. It will have the same cover so it can be easily identified. On the fence of changing the name. I will definitely rework the synopsis. I have been told that it doesn’t convey enough as to what the story is about. Especially with sites with limited tags, it sounds far too generic.
I did have an outline already fully made for the first “arc” thing, book, part. Idk. It got an ending. And, a general outline as what the story as a whole would end.
Better interaction with readers across platforms.
3:
For RoyalRoad and Webnovel, this was going to go the route of army building and light kingdom building. Multiple POV’s was a given from the start and would have continued throughout to explain things about the world to the reader while keeping the MC in the dark. Other main relevant tags would have been the “evil religion”, “demons”, and “priests” descriptions. Overall, it would have gone the route of the MC staying somewhat true to the reason why he was summoned. Being originally the healer/holy user of his classmates. And ultimately going against his classmates because misunderstandings. Including why the system and not the world/gods was changing things for a “balancing” by routing heroes. This was cleared a bit on a RoyalRoad comment.
Webnovel specifically, in chapter 3 there was a brief dialogue at the beginning (between two entities) that wasn’t conveyed that great with the lack of italics. They are important for the grand scheme of things. I’ll keep in mind for future formatting for the site.
Novel35, fuck you. That is all.
With that out of the way, spoilers.
Immediate spoilers:
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