So basically as I said I will be doing a rewrite. For this, I want to make a little discord server for anyone interested. It will be a place to give criticism as well as for me to upload parts of the chapters and for anyone who wants to give feedback to do so. Just here to ask if anyone would be interested in doing so?
e.g. one of the things I want to do is figure out what ways I can make the relationship with Charlie and the Chiefess more interesting. Like how even though her species makes it so she has quite a predatory and radical behaviour, how may she potentially fight against this or how does Charlie respond to her being so forceful and aggressive in the early chapters.
Of course, as well grammar is a large part of this.
EDIT: I will make another update next week, as well as a new chapter. I will also give out some more detail about the server and I will be happy to reply to any questions people may have.
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