After much thought, right up until releasing Ch28 - Elysia Athas (2), I have decided how I will continue the story. I will do a full edit pass of Vol1 and Vol2 while writing Vol3. Vol3 and further chapters will reflect the changes coming to Vol1 and 2. The changes are as such.
1) I already did this for the last chapter of Vol 2, but it will be done to the rest of the story as well. I am moving all ages for the students up by 2. All 15s to 16, 16s to 17, 17s, to 18, ect. Just a flat +2 across the board. Birthdays will not change, just the years that everything takes place.
2) The 4-way relationship between Kye, Alethea, Doran, and Michelle. This is being changed. I've received feedback both for poly and for pairs. I personally am not for the poly any longer and don't want to continue writing it. In the rewrite, I will split them up and adjust parentage accordingly.
3) This one is not set in stone yet, I am thinking on it still... Michelle may be moved from the Maya family to the Knight family. That would also mean Michael and their mother moving families. To be determined. Vol3 chapters will not reflect this until the rewrite is done. I will add an author's note to a chapter when this is decided.
Thank you everyone for reading! I hope these changes are not too drastic. The first is necessary for a reason I do not wish to disclose yet, and the second is... I feel I can do better with the story this way.
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